Two other authors are writing tonight, so you can simply guess at what they will have added based on the outline. The basic idea is that at your point James has left the group angrily after arguing over leadership with Will...Sally is feverish and weak and Ketzal & Will remain to hungrily and wearily [...]
Posted by jonpotts
|
1 Comment
XVII.
“ I’m hungry,”
“ Sally we need to find James, he might be hurt,” said Will
“ But-“
“ No buts, we’ve got to find James.”
“ Hey will what’s that?” said Ketzel.
“ I don’t know……….. shhhh,” said Will.
It was a deer, standing in a thicket of brush. The animal was beautiful, the most beautiful thing those three [...]
Posted by jonpotts
|
1 Comment
Ketzel awoke form her slumber, she missed the voice of James. He had been missing for weeks since they had last saw him. She felt like it had been an eternity though. James was becoming more and more distant. Will and Sally had almost forgotten about him and Ketzel was becoming more impatient by [...]
Posted by jonpotts
|
No Comments
Escape From Hindmirror Village, a collaborative novel
Posted by jonpotts
|
No Comments
Will carefully made his way into the cave , trying to get down the tunnel without hurting himself or Sally. When they got into the cave Will sat Sally down on her moss bed.
“ Will I’m hungry.” Sally whined.
“ We don’t have any food. I’d go to get some but I cant leave you alone.” [...]
Posted by jonpotts
|
8 Comments