A growl came from the outside Will and James looked everywhere but could not find the beast that could have snarled. Quick glances shot around the cave everyone moved further down into the cave. Ketzel noticed that James didn't speak didn't moved just sat there curled in a ball she actually thought he seemed scared she moved over and he just seemed to ignore her. Ketzel open her mouth to speak but instead kept the silence. Everyone drifted off and through the day they slept waking for moments at a time but for the first time they slept, slept to the best of their ability.
Posted by jonpotts on June 10, 2009
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