Will carefully made his way into the cave , trying to get down the tunnel without hurting himself or Sally. When they got into the cave Will sat Sally down on her moss bed.
“ Sally there’s nothing to do. Find a way to entertain yourself.” Will was in another one of his bad moods.
Will didn’t even argue with her. He knew that if he did Sally would just ignore him and leave anyway. “ I’m coming with you.” He said, and followed Sally out of the cave. Sally walked strait into the woods. She didn’t tell Will that she was actually headed to the place. Sally walked fast, and Will almost had to run to catch up to her.
“To the stream. It’s awefully hot don’t you think?” Sally decided she would go to the stream to cool off and then go to see the others.
Will and Sally sat on a large rock by an old tree. They sat for a few minutes before they got up to start walking again. Will turned away from Sally while he tried to figure out which way they should go. “ I think we should go…” Will started to point to where he thought they should go. Then he turned around and found Sally lying on the ground. She had fainted while Will wasn’t looking. Will started to panick. He didn’t know what to do. He knelt down beside Sally and put his hand on her forehead. It was burning hot. Will scooped Sally into his arms and ran through the woods to where he thought he would find Ketzel and James.
Posted by jonpotts on June 15, 2009
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